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02 June 2005 @ 11:21 pm
i finally did it!!!  
I also delare this as the first of many artistic writings on School of Art! *applause*
Check it out sas, see how i (kind of) managed to rhyme with anger, with john's help of course.

Is this the child of a broken home

Constantly feeling unloved and alone

Is this what society will grow to be

Full of offspring from destroyed families

Parents smash the glasses and walk out the door

Is it now one in three or one in four?

Now they are tucked up in bed

Quietly thinking, "Is it something I said?"

The feeling grows into solitary anger

Growing gradually, a stranger

Cracking slowly like a weathering stone

This is the child of a broken home
 
 
 
da_buffsterda_buffster on June 3rd, 2005 06:42 pm (UTC)
gorgeous!

you can rhyme so much better than i can lol!

I would disect it more, but I'm really not in the mood right now.