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08 June 2005 @ 06:27 pm
Angel  


Burning wings reflect the light
Hungry eyes blind the sight
Blackened halo holds the proof
Dulling hands fail to sooth
Blinding glow spreads the cold
Silky voice sells the soul
Blueing mouth tries to tell
How an angel, fell from hell



 
 
 
masqueradesfademasqueradesfade on June 8th, 2005 07:00 pm (UTC)
*applause*
I love it!!!
But i am wondering, what do you mean by "blueing mouth"? I get the impression a pen has leaked!
Hit me if I'm being an idiot!!
: )
da_buffsterda_buffster on June 9th, 2005 05:52 am (UTC)
Re: *applause*
Hehe, ::hits you::
It was like... being cold, y'know? Cold heart type thing. 'Cept I put it there because when you get really cold your lips go blue!
masqueradesfademasqueradesfade on June 9th, 2005 05:14 pm (UTC)
Re: *applause*
ah!!! Understand, very clever. Good thinking!!
*limegirl on June 8th, 2005 07:43 pm (UTC)
I think I've reviewed this before! And I still think it's brilliant!